TITLE: The Sky is Every Where
This novel is overwrought at best. Understanding the after affects of a sibling death seems to get lost in translation. Characters are cliché and flatly drawn, specific plot points are never fully explained, and the idea that grief and physical attraction are somehow intertwined seems heavy handed. The voice of Lennie fluctuates from whiny and love-struck to deeply depressed within a matter of a few sentences. Readers discover that not only were Toby and Bailey destined to be married, but that she was also pregnant with his child.
This novel attempts to cover too many issues and while it makes the story interesting it also allows for the message to get lost. Finding an audience for this novel would be difficult at best, since this is not a traditional love story or even a well told story of grief.


